Lauren- 4th Grade- W4
Griswold Elementary School
Lauren the Cheetah
Once upon a time, way back when animals could talk, and
the whole world was covered with water except one part, there was an
island that was all forest. In that forest there was a river about 10
feet wide. Next to the river there was a little shack. The shack was
made of bamboo. The bamboo was dark brown. In the shack there was a
cheetah named Lauren who could sing mind controlling songs, and she
lived with a monkey named Makayla who was only two feet tall. Makayla
sent Lauren on different missions since Makayla was too short.
One enchanted fall morning, Lauren and Makayla were baking caramel brownies.
All of a sudden, a rock flies through the window rapidly and there was
a note attached to it. Lauren picked it up and read “The world
will end @ 4:00 P.M. and to stop it, Makayla must go to her sister Jasmine’s
house to stop it. And to stop it you must turn off the timer by pressing
the giant red button” When Lauren told that to Makayla, she said
she could not do it because she would never get there by 4:00 P.M. since
Jasmine’s hut by the beach was seven hours away and it is already
10:00 A.M. Next Lauren said that she would run all the way in about
three hours. Right then, Makayla said never to go to The Devil’s
Tower.
It was a frosty fall morning. The ground was wet with dew and the sun
was shining bright. Lauren was putting on her purple sweatshirt and
gray sweatpants. She grabbed her water, some money, pliers, and night
vision goggles. Lauren went to Makayla and said, “I’m sorry
but I have to go right now to stop the world from ending.” When
Lauren set out on the road, she felt like she had the world in her own
hands. The road was rocky and bumpy and the weather was chilly and frosty.
The sun was just over the horizon. Lauren was traveling for about two
hours and suddenly the road became smooth granite and the weather changed
to the sun shining bright in the sky and it felt like summer. In the
distance Lauren saw a sign that said “Sydney’s Ice Cream
Shop”. Just then, she saw a flying monkey with a little hat and
a name tag that said, “Hello, my name is George”. Lauren
said hello to the monkey and he said to follow him. Lauren followed
him down a path of sand. They finally reached a tall, tall, “white”
building with a black roof. Lauren entered the building feeling curios
because she loved to go on adventures.
Just when Lauren entered the building, she heard the door lock. Not
knowing what was happening, she looked around and saw a sign that said
“The Devil’s Tower”, the place Makayla told Lauren
never to go. All of a sudden, Lauren fell through the trap door just
big enough for her to fall through. Suddenly Lauren saw a purple slimy
animal with ten legs and its back had lumps on it. The creature say
four words, “You are trapped forever!” Its voice was low
and it smelled like rotten eggs and milk. By then, Lauren felt nauseous
and frightened because she did not know what was going on. Just then
the creature said, “I know you have a special power, so tell me
or you will have to go into the teddy bear cage.” The reason it
was the teddy bear cage was since at the Devil’s Tower, cuddly
is evil and bad is good.
Lauren had to think harder than ever before! Just then Lauren started
singing an addicting song. While Lauren was singing, Kuku Raguku, the
strange creature opened the cage that Lauren was in and she ran as fast
as she could back into the forest saying ’’So Long Sucker!”
Luckily, Lauren was only 3 minutes away from Jasmine’s hut. When
she arrived, Jasmine was sitting in her big fluffy chair reading a book
and it was only about 3:30 P.M. Lauren asked Jasmine why she could not
press the read button. She told Lauren that she did not know what to
do. Lauren pressed the button as fast as she could and on the screen
it said, “The world will not end.” Lauren was relieved.
Lauren asked Jasmine if she had a quick way to get home and Jasmine
said that Lauren could use her magic broomstick that would fly right
back to Lauren’s home. While Lauren flew out the door, Jasmine
yelled “Thank You!”
Once Lauren and Makayla greeted each other, Lauren said, ”I had
an amazing adventure!” “What happened?” Makayla asked.
Lauren thought about telling Makayla about going in the Devil’s
Tower. Lauren decided to tell her. “On my way to tell Jasmine,
the road changed from rocky and bumpy to as smooth as granite, and the
weather changed from cool to hot. “When did that happen?”
asked Makayla. “When I entered the Devil’s Tower.”
replied Lauren. Makayla asked Lauren why she went in the Devil’s
Tower. Lauren told her because it was disguised as Sydney’s Ice
Cream Shop. Lauren told Makayla everything about what happened to her.
Makayla could not believe it.